What do you think of this poem?

Hi. Nice Poem kind of dark , sad and very reflective, very strong feelings and emotions, I like how you painted a picture words to your readers and how you captive my imagination and thoughts, your poetic persona is awesome, i love your writing skills. The mood and the vision is a message about trying to fix things that are out of our control but i see a sense of hope in your last stanza. keep writing and sharing your poem with others. Good job.